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I'm a newbie!! [Aug. 3rd, 2007|02:19 pm]
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[jayneleo]
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Hi there!

I joined Elfwood not that long ago and i've put 3 pieces of work in Wyvern's Library but nobody has comented on any of them yet!

I joined to Elfwood and Elfwood Plugs communities and then discovered this little beauty!

I've just started to write a fantasy novel and i would really like some constructive critism or just general feedback.

Here's my Wyvern's Library page: http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/libr/s/n/snugglebunny/snugglebunny.html

(I'm only really want critque on The Tales of Fagelio - Chapter One... The poems were put on their more for fun!)

Sorry but i'm not a computer wizz kid and i'm afarid i don't know how to put a link (for my first chapter only) onto a post! i've looked through FAQ's too. So i anyone can fill me in on that too, i'd much appreciate it!

Ta mucho! XX

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